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The Setting Is Also Not the Story

Not every detail can be addressed in one blog post, so I wanted to write a quick followup to the post: Don't Write the Plot, Write the Story

That post didn't mention setting or world-building, mostly because posts have to be limited in scope so as not to become books in their own right. So let me be clear: regardless of whether you're using the real world as a framework or inventing an entirely new universe, setting is absolutely important! 

The balance of setting with elements like plot and character development varies depending on the genre. A contemporary novel still needs to be grounded in its setting, but a historical novel will likely need to devote more space to establishing the world (creating a fuller picture of the world for those who may not know that history, did not live then, etc.). High Fantasy requires more world-building than Urban Fantasy, and it will almost always need more space on the page to explain the world because you can't expect the reader to have a preexisting framework to rely on if you're inventing a universe from scratch. That balance will also shift based on whether it's the first or fifteenth book in a series.

But no matter how richly developed the world, the setting is also not the story. It is unquestionably an important piece, but it is ultimately the backdrop that facilitates our experience of the story. 

Consider plays. I often remind writers that a novel is not a script—a fiction writer is required to do the work of the director, the actors, the set designer, the costume designer, and even the lighting designer, to an extent. Plays are a very different form of storytelling because so much must be added by each team creating the version they perform. And undoubtedly the interpretations of actors and directors become a critical part of their version of the story.

But a traditional Elizabethan version of Hamlet in full costume, with full sets (etc.) is not a different story than that same company's performance in their street clothes on a bare stage. Theater companies have even done intentionally minimalist performances like this.

Because while the setting (including costumes) enhances the story, and certainly influences our experience of the story, it is ultimately not itself the core story.

On the flip side, Hamlet with a different director's and cast's interpretation may ultimately be a different story. Because as I wrote here, the plot is also not the story. 

Don't Write the Plot, Write the Story

When you're evaluating the trajectory of your story (whether that's before or after writing a first draft), it's important to understand what fundamentally makes a story compelling. Why does it draw us in, and why do we care to keep reading (or watching)? What makes the ending satisfying? 

Many writers, especially at the beginning, fall into the trap of believing that a story is the plot, i.e., the external events that occur. Things like:

  • A heroine's friend is kidnapped.
  • A romantic couple meets.
  • The MC stumbles upon magic he's not supposed to know exists.
  • The maligned hero escapes from jail.
Whatever your genre of commercial fiction, there is (in 99% of cases) going to be a plot, meaning an external framework of events that occur as time passes. And the plot is important! It needs to make sense, it needs to move at a good pace, it needs to be a complete experience (often called an arc), and so on. 

But the plot is not the story.

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The story is the main character's (or characters'—but I'll stick with one MC for clarity) growth arc. That is, how a character is emotionally impacted over the course of the story, and how they change (or choose not to) as a result.

The plot is a framework, but the character is the design and the substance. 

Even if your story primarily focuses on the action (like solving a mystery, or catching a criminal), the plot should be shaped by the details of your MC. What drives them? What knowledge, beliefs, and misconceptions do they have? The character's background and personality should influence what choices they make and what actions they take (or try to take)—otherwise known as the plot.

If your plot would be exactly the same with entirely different characters swapped in, you're doing something wrong.

What we connect with are the characters and their emotional journeys. Sometimes those journeys can be incremental (consider long-running TV shows like Bones and House), with the characters being nudged very slowly along their arcs. In such cases, individual episodes (or even entire novels, in action-heavy genres) don't necessarily have a full emotional arc for each MC. Often, stories like these rely on the emotional journeys of temporary side characters to draw us in and evoke that sense of fulfillment for individual episodes. Nevertheless, when you take the story as a whole—the entire series—the characters absolutely do grow and change over time. Or they intentionally and stubbornly choose not to, which can be the point of their story. But that journey is what draws us in. 

For example, with a romance, the story is never about the mechanics of how two people meet, or a list of what dates they go on. The story is how these people influence one another, leading to personal growth for each of them that allows them to come together as a healthy couple we can trust to navigate the future together. This is true for a positive romance arc in any genre.

A negative romance arc would result in the romantic relationship ending, but it's still not simply a list of conflicts or fights that happen. Rather, it's the emotional impact of those interactions on your characters, and the choices they make as a result.

Regardless of whether there's romance involved, nailing the character's arc—and how it's impacted by the plot—is integral to writing a satisfying story. Obstacles need to be engaged with (even if they're not overcome), and false beliefs need to be confronted, allowing the character to grow and learn as a result.

Sometimes, particularly with negative arcs, characters do refuse to change. To make such stories fulfilling, often the character must be left facing believable—even devastating—consequences. 

It is the seamless combination of external events (plot points) and compelling internal character arcs that creates engaging stories people can't put down—and will want to rave about and reread. 

So by all means, plan out your plot. Fill in the action beats in your favorite beat sheet or outline system. But remember to root those external events in the foundation of your characters. Because the plot isn't the story. Without those well-developed characters, a plot is just a sequence of events.



2022 Writers for Hope Auction Starts Today!

It's April, and that means it's time for the ninth annual Writers for Hope Auction. Each year, editors, agents, and authors contribute amazing auction items to raise money to combat sexual assault and support LGBTQ+ rights, and 100% of the proceeds go to charity. We are proud to support organizations that treat all people with the dignity and respect they deserve, and we're happy that this year's proceeds will be going to The Every Voice Coalition and Lambda LegalThis year's auction starts today!



There are over 100 items being auctioned off this year. Whether you're looking for a critique opportunity, new books to read, or a great gift for a friend, this is your chance to get what you need while also supporting a wonderful organization that fights back. Bids start at only $10!


The auction goes all week, and bidding closes at 8:59pm ET (5:59pm PT) on Friday. Watch out for those last-minute bidders, and thank you for continuing to support this wonderful cause!

Pride Month Special

Happy Pride! 

Representation matters, and the world needs more stories featuring the full spectrum of the rainbow. So we have a special offer for LGBTQ+ stories:

Book an LGBTQ+ project by 6/30 and get 20% OFF!

Because love is love is love.


Details:
  • Manuscript must contain LGTBQ+ characters, and LGBTQ+ themes must be a significant element of the project. Any length or sub-genre counts!
  • #Ownvoices stories are encouraged, but all authors are welcome to take advantage of this offer.
  • If you aren't sure whether your project qualifies for this special, please feel free to ask.
  • Project must be booked by June 30, 2021 and must be scheduled to start by December 31, 2021.
    • Note that your project doesn't have to be ready by 6/30, but you do need to book a spot by then.
    • A signed contract and a deposit are required to book a spot in our schedule. For more info, see our FAQs.
  • The 20% discount will be applied to the final invoice.
  • Only one promotion can be applied to any one service.

Questions? Ready to book? Get in touch!

2021 Writers for Hope Auction for @RAINN Starts Today!

As we all continue to live with the reality of a worldwide pandemic, one piece of normalcy you can count on is the eighth annual Writers for Hope Auction. Each year, editors, agents, and authors contribute amazing auction items to raise money to combat sexual assault, and 100% of the proceeds go to the Rape, Abuse and Incest National Network (RAINN), the United States' largest anti-sexual assault organization. This year's auction starts today!

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There are over 80 items being auctioned off this year. Whether you're looking for a critique opportunity, new books to read, or a great gift for a friend, this is a wonderful chance to get what you need while also standing up against sexual assault and supporting a wonderful organization that fights back. Bids start at only $10!


The auction goes all week, and bidding closes at 8:59pm ET (5:59pm PT) on Friday. Watch out for those last-minute bidders, and thank you for continuing to support this wonderful cause!

A Special Offer for Black Writers

These have been turbulent weeks. Both Jennifer and I unequivocally believe Black Lives Matter, and we have been working in our private lives to support protesters and the BLM movement how we can. In terms of Touchstone Editing, we've chosen thus far to amplify Black voices and Black authors, rather than shifting the focus to our outrage, our heartbreak, or our business. 

However, it comes as no surprise to anyone that traditional publishing has a bias against Black authors. Black stories matter, but they often do not get offers (or equivalent advances) from traditional publishers.

Because I do not currently work for a publisher, I have been considering what action I could take as an independent editor who does not influence acquisitions. Ultimately, I've decided the way to help is to do what I do best. So when I can, I will be offering free editorial letters to Black authors.
    Please keep in mind I am only one person, and I will be fitting this work in around my clients. My ability to do this may be sporadic, and turnaround times may be longer than usual.

Details:

  1. This is for Black writers. All you have to do is fill out the form below.
    • It does not matter whether you plan to publish traditionally or independently.
  2. Your story does not have to be Own Voices, but it's certainly welcome to be.
  3. Your story can be up to 100,000 words.
  4. I will take you at your word and will not be policing or confirming your identity in any way.
    • Please don't be the jerk who signs up because of the word "free" even though you do not identify as Black.
  5. Folks will be selected randomly from the responses. A maximum of one free editorial letter will be offered to any one writer.
  6. Because this will be an ongoing effort, the form will remain open. I am aiming to contact the first writer on June 22nd.
    • Your project does not have to be ready for editing before filling out this form. If you are selected, we will discuss scheduling that works for both of us.
  7. If you are offered a free editorial letter, there is no obligation of any kind except warning me about any objectionable content, such as rape, incest, etc. While these do not disqualify your project from this opportunity, I will need to know details and context before agreeing to read your story.
    • If your project contains content with which I'm uncomfortable or is otherwise not a good fit, I reserve the right to withdraw the offer.
  8. Please note: I am generally not a good fit for anything gory, Thrillers, Horror, Hard Sci-Fi, or Epic Fantasy. 
  9. Over time, I will provide these free editorial letters as I am able to, but I make no promises about getting to everyone who fills out this form.

Q&A:

  • Why is only Anya participating at this time?
    • Jennifer is currently going through something personal. If in the future she is able to offer her time, she will also be (randomly) selecting and reaching out to those who fill out this form.
  • Why is my genre not listed?
    • I have included the genres for which I feel I can be the most help. If your project doesn't fit, please choose "other." We can discuss details if your project is selected. Because folks will be selected at random, the genre you note is mostly informational at this point.
    • If other editors get involved, they may have their own preferences for genre, so please do note what yours is in the "other" field, if applicable.
  • What heat levels are you accepting for romance stories?
    • Any heat level, as long as the story remains a romance and not erotica.
    • If you write erotica, please put that in the "other" category.
  • What if I need a developmental, line, or copy edit, not an editorial letter?
    • This offer is specifically for editorial letters, also known as manuscript critiques, but of course Jennifer and I would both be happy to work with you in general! Check out all our services here.
  • What's all this about "other editors"?
    • The idea is to help Black writers, as many as possible. But I'm only one person, so if editors who hear about this would like to participate, I'm happy to let them. By asking whether you would be open to your responses being shared, I'm hoping to minimize the number of times folks are asked to fill out forms like this. 

      If you would prefer to work only with the Touchstone Editors, simply select the option not to share your responses.
  • If you have a question and you feel others may benefit from the answer, please post it in the comments!
    • If you would prefer to keep your question private, please contact me.
  • I am an editor who would like to participate. How do I get involved?
    • Please email me! It would be helpful if you include some information about your editing background, such as a link to your website.